of the tallest mountain in the Sierras,
a salt-seeking marmot munched a hole
right in the middle of my foam mat
stashed in the scree at our base camp.
Sleeping on bare rock that night was no picnic.
My bruised sacrum and hips found no solace
from muller and quern grinding basalt into flour.
My bruised sacrum and hips found no solace
from muller and quern grinding basalt into flour.
I can't imagine the marmot survived the night
after eating that ensolite. Clearly, it tasted
good to him, seasoned with chocolate,
sweat, and the yeast of new love under stars.
good to him, seasoned with chocolate,
sweat, and the yeast of new love under stars.
I didn't think to cut my holy pad in half
and marry the two uneaten ends together.
If only duct tape had been invented,
if only I'd thought to bring a roll with me.
But the view from the crest of Mt. Whitney
was a feast for the eyes that nourished
me long after he lost his appetite—
when climbing the tallest mountain
wasn't fodder enough.
8/21/2014
first draft: A salt-seeking marmot. I had one eat a giant hole right in the middle of my ensolite pad—on Mt. Whitney. Sleeping on bare rock was no picnic. I can't imagine the marmot survived after eating all that foam. I didn't think to cut my pad in two and join the two ends together. If only I did, and if only duct tape was invented, and I'd thought to bring a roll with me. Still, the view from the top was worth it.
I realized later I had conflated John Oliver Simon with Bob Hamilton. There comes a point when they all roll into one thing, the boyfriend, the partner, the other.
was a feast for the eyes that nourished
me long after he lost his appetite—
when climbing the tallest mountain
wasn't fodder enough.
8/21/2014
first draft: A salt-seeking marmot. I had one eat a giant hole right in the middle of my ensolite pad—on Mt. Whitney. Sleeping on bare rock was no picnic. I can't imagine the marmot survived after eating all that foam. I didn't think to cut my pad in two and join the two ends together. If only I did, and if only duct tape was invented, and I'd thought to bring a roll with me. Still, the view from the top was worth it.
I realized later I had conflated John Oliver Simon with Bob Hamilton. There comes a point when they all roll into one thing, the boyfriend, the partner, the other.
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