11/5/2013
“Two for Tuesday” prompts on Tuesdays.
Write a concealed poem. Could be about a concealed weapon, concealing emotions, concealing intentions, etc. Cover it up and write about it.
Write an unconcealed poem. Okay, take everything from the first prompt and uncover it. Reveal everything that’s hidden.
My favorite are the small gulls at Lake Merritt who tapdance on the grass after rain to thrum up the worms. Don't know what kind—like Sabine's gulls. They have white polkadots on their tail feathers. Took me ages to figure out what they were doing. Then I remembered an odd Pomo photo where they were tapping on the earth with sticks—a raindance to make the worms come up. It all fell into place.
No date on this prose variation, late 1990s or early 2000s. I found another skeleton version from 2001.
One day I saw seagulls tap dancing at Lake Merritt. Pat Pat Pat, and listen. Drum and listen. Next minute, a worm came up. Of course of them. Promo and Miwok rain sticks. When did that behavior enter the evolutionary pattern?
For some reason I dated this first piece 1981, it could be a typo. Or maybe I revisited the idea decades later. And forgot that I wrote about it before. It is a different poem, same intent. Maybe I should type it up.

No comments:
Post a Comment