Monday, May 15, 2017

TWO GREEN TURTLES

Asking a student to use comparisons instead of the word odes (where every idea is fun or awesome), I took some of his images and demonstrated the process. It became a poem on its own merit.

Two green turtles
with orange racing stripes
climb the rocks to bask in the sun
They swim amid wary goldfish
like fall leaves in the wind.


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